Organization: College Crusade of Rhode Island
Mission: The mission of the College Crusade of Rhode Island is to increase high school graduation,
college and career readiness, and college completion for youth in Rhode Island’s low-income communities.
college and career readiness, and college completion for youth in Rhode Island’s low-income communities.
What does the mission statement address?
The mission statement addresses their purpose, and how they are helping low-income families.
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- It is clear and simple
- Easily explained
- Address where they are located
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- That they are helping high school and middle school from low-income families
- Include how many students they are serving
Rephrase: The college crusade implies that they are helping communities from low-income
families in Rhode Island achieve higher education. By having advisors in middle school,
and high school. The organization was created to provide educational programs to help the organization achieve their goals
and high school. The organization was created to provide educational programs to help the organization achieve their goals
Vision: All Rhode Island students engage in a rigorous educational experience, graduate high school,
and complete a post-secondary school program. Rhode Island youth will be prepared to take on meaningful roles in their families, flourish in the workplace, and actively contribute to their community.
Rephrase: The vision statement states that the educational programs will the students and
families they are working with. The educational programs will develop help the students develop great skills that will prepare them for the real world.
Add: I like the vision statement, but I will also change the wording and make it shorter.
Thanks for your post Nathali. I think the focus on middle and high school programs in your "re-write" is an interesting addition. Why did you feel that was important to include? What does it say about the beliefs of CC about how to achieve higher rates of HS + college completion?
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Victoria
Hey girl, I really liked your post, but it was a little hard to read. I think the formatting can be altered a little.
ReplyDeleteBut I have always enjoyed you sharing about your internship. And I like how you were able to write the mission in your own words. You can tell how passionate you are about the work you do!